Thursday, May 20, 2010

Thaathi goes to a wedding

She draped a sari of red silk and gold
Donned a buff-sleeved blouse of old
Fixed a pearl brooch on her shoulder
A golden waistband, a silver keychain;

She piled her hair into a graceful top-knot
And pinned on a jewel of garnet and gold
Swirled some strings of jasmine around it
And stuck a blood red rose on the crest.

She took out the old family diamonds
A pair for her ears and a pair for her nose;
Put on her old necklace of gold
Slipped on jingling gold bangles
And topped them with finger rings – coral and gold

She dabbed on powder to brighten her moon face
Then dotted her forehead with a bright red bindi
Lined her eyes with a lash of kohl black
And chewed on a betel leaf to red-stain her lips

She picked up her shiny old purse of yore
Looked at herself in the mirror just twice
Then turned to the door, a smile on her face
Then put on her slippers, shiny new
Now she was ready to bless the couple.

2 comments:

Unknown said...

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tethered thoughts said...

Reminds one of the lost ditties of childhood & innocence--strangely enough the vernacular ones---can't recall the English rhymes being quite so touching!!

Sumathi---your words are powerful--do keep writing!!!enjoyed all the posts!!